After some feedback from our teacher she told us that our album cover looks too similar to our myspace as the waves, colours and pictures are all the same. I realise that if we want fans to buy our products then they all need to have a sense of individuality while still maintaining their key brand image. We have made changes and amendments to our cover and without further a due here it is!
Showing posts with label teacher feedback. Show all posts
Showing posts with label teacher feedback. Show all posts
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
Monday, September 14, 2009
BLK feedback
A great blog Matt - all up to date, and some really good ideas and research emerging. Keep up the good work!
Tuesday, September 1, 2009
BLK feedback
Some good research posts so far Matt, a useful start to your background work for this project. I particularly like your genre work. When you add videos, make sure you include some commentary/analysis - explaining why you chose them would be ideal, for example.
Some classwork from last term is missing though and you need to catch up quickly, as it will be so busy when we get back to school.
We also need to get you using/applying advanced theory more explicitly when you analyse music videos, think Vernallis for now, although you will also need to get to grips with Goodwin in the new term.
For now then, your short term targets are:
1. Link your lip sync (which I am guessing is now done?) and workshop video to your blog
2. Add your lip sync evaluation
3. Post the work you have done for Miss T on Vernallis. See the main Music Video Blog for the specific details of what is needed here
4. Post your track research/ideas – we need to see what tracks you have in mind for your own video
5. We need a photo and some info about you please! Also your blog isn't the easiest to read - would different colour text make any difference?
All instructions are on the main blog if you are not sure what you should have done. There will be a lot happening when term starts so the sooner this outstanding work is completed, the better.
Great effort so far, keep up the good work and see you soon!
Some classwork from last term is missing though and you need to catch up quickly, as it will be so busy when we get back to school.
We also need to get you using/applying advanced theory more explicitly when you analyse music videos, think Vernallis for now, although you will also need to get to grips with Goodwin in the new term.
For now then, your short term targets are:
1. Link your lip sync (which I am guessing is now done?) and workshop video to your blog
2. Add your lip sync evaluation
3. Post the work you have done for Miss T on Vernallis. See the main Music Video Blog for the specific details of what is needed here
4. Post your track research/ideas – we need to see what tracks you have in mind for your own video
5. We need a photo and some info about you please! Also your blog isn't the easiest to read - would different colour text make any difference?
All instructions are on the main blog if you are not sure what you should have done. There will be a lot happening when term starts so the sooner this outstanding work is completed, the better.
Great effort so far, keep up the good work and see you soon!
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